Women are being disadvantage in the labour market due to limited access of well paid jobs, and are considered suitable for, and are placed into more feminine works.females are less than half the total enrollment in technical and educational institutions while girls are hindering their future of employment by taking on less technical and are sticking to more feminine courses.In least developed countries education for disadvantage girls are limited due to requirements and the cost of courses.However programs are put into place by none-governmental organizations but monitoring of the impact of training on trainees are unmanageable
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Hi ellandi,
This is a good summary. Congratulaions on a first effort! Your summary is well within the word limit so you are fine. You were allowed 120 words and your summary took up 96 words. That is very, very good.
There is something I would encourage you to keep an eye on in your writing. It is the tense of your verbs. For example, if I had to change the first sentence of your summary, instead of,
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Women are being disadvantage in the labour market due to limited access of well paid jobs, and are considered suitable for, and are placed into more feminine works.
I would write,
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Women are being disadvantaged in the labour market due to limited access
ofto wellpaidpaying jobs, and they are considered suitable for, and are placed into more feminineworksjobs.________________________________________________
Apart from this, you absolutely got the message of the passage and you translated it into your own words very well.
I would give this summary a grade 1.