My summary essay Week 2

Submitted by june joseph on 11 November 2012 - 11:29pm

The constant inclusion of women in the working arena is expanding worldwide, yet women are still being discriminated against by their job types, thus causing a significant drop in their earnings and an alarming rise on the poverty scale. Socio-cultural factors have crushed the potentials of the female gender, in some parts of the world, leading them to choose beneath their levels and therefore becoming less marketable. Although there are groups providing programs for underprivileged girls in poor countries, these often go unnoticed due to the absence of structured attention the trainees receive. The offered programs are usually outlined in prejudiced ways, leaning to unrewarding.


tburn (not verified) 12 November 2012 - 7:41pm

Keep up the good work! You blow it up again... i think I going try to write a summary this week.

susieq (not verified) 13 November 2012 - 1:54am

This is good. how many words is it? Is it less than 120 words?

I like your essays June, it is hard for me to write them but I will try tho.

elladi (not verified) 14 November 2012 - 2:30am

Women are being disadvantage in the labour market due to the limited access of well paid jobs, and are considered suitable for, and are placed in more feminine work.females are less than half the total enrolment in technical and educational institutions while girls are hindering their future of employment by taking on less technical and are sticking more to feminine courses.In least developed countries education for disadvantage girls are limited due to lack of requirements and the cost of courses.However institutions are provided by none-governmental organizations,thus monitoring of the impact on the training of trainees have been unmanageable

Kathy-ann Daniel 15 November 2012 - 12:02am

Hi June,

As usual, this is a very, very good summary. You expressed the main ideas of the essay very well and in short form. The only thing I would say is that you have 15 more words to write till you reach the limit, so I would have given more detail about how girls are underrepresented in education and even when they do get an education, it usually prepares them for low paying jobs.

This essay I would give a grade 2. You did very well for this, your second summary.

Hi Kathy,

Once again many thanks for your review. This essay was a bit more challenging and I definitely did not want to go overboard, that's the main reason I stopped where I did.

Anyway, I have attempted a short story. Do read and review. I hope you enjoy it!

Best wishes

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