"Pop music and dance on display in the Caribbean today are corrupting the youth and making them irresponsible."

Submitted by june joseph on 7 November 2012 - 9:33pm

Right through the 20th Century and beyond, pop music has been linked closely with youth culture. With many of the consumers of popular music being young people, it's no surprise that youth have been shaped and influenced by the themes, artists and activities which pop music involves.

Pop music - short for "popular" - has become a large part of the everyday lives of youth all around the Caribbean. This particular attachment can have considerable influence on individuals, affecting everything from mood, to the negative slang words they use not only among their peers, but adults as well.

The profanity used in some song lyrics lead to some youth copying this language, while others try to emulate the lifestyles and themes depicted by the artists of said music. When these youngsters are unable to finance these expensive lifestyles, they become depressed or rebellious. Concern for these negative effects have been expressed by various groups, for example, the media and drug awareness associations, all over the Caribbean.

The youth is identified, by the music industry, as an important market segment all of its own. As different styles of music, example-punk, grunge, heavy metal- have become popular, youth have responded by forming groups whose activities are based on listening to a particular genre of popular music. For example, researchers claim to have found that listening to hip-hop music can increase a young person's likelihood of taking drugs such as marijuana or/and alcohol. Young people have thus constructed their identities around pop music assuming certain fashions and attitudes.

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Archie 10 November 2012 - 10:28pm

I like your essay. It is very good. You have a way with words.

mary 11 November 2012 - 2:28pm

Hello June,

You are very good at writing essays. I hope you write more so that I can see how you go about it. Congratulations on another good essay.

Kathy-ann Daniel 11 November 2012 - 4:24pm

Hello June,


This is another excellent essay. Your writing style is very polished and your use of language is very expert. This essay would be a grade 1 in my opinion.


You have identified the consequences of pop music and dance very eloquently. The only suggestion I would make here - and it is for the other group members who will be reading this more than it is for you. I suggest that you try to use the words in the essay to make your points easy to see.


For example, the question states, pop music and dance are "corrupting" the youth. I would try to make sure that my essay repeats the statement "pop music and dance are corrupting the youth" and go on with "because etc etc....." My essay would them go on to give reasons why I think pop music and dance are corrupting them.


Also, in my essay, I would state, "Pop music is making the youth in the Caribbean irresponsible because ...etc etc...." and I would go on to give reasons why pop music and dance are making the youth irresponsible.


By doing this, I would be sure that I was remembering and sticking to the points that the examiner wants to read about. Also, I would be making the points so clear that the examiner would not have to go searching through my essay for the points, they would be clearly stated for him/her to see.


Again, well done June!

june joseph 11 November 2012 - 10:13pm

Thanks guys, one and all, for the encouraging words. You all should post some of your work so I can see. After all, we help each other learn and learn from each other. Kathy thanks so much for the reviews, I appreciate you truthfulness.

More of my essays to come.

CJJ

tburn (not verified) 12 November 2012 - 7:39pm

You are a very good writer. I like reading your essays. You going to mash dem up in CXC!

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