i just think this story is amazing..i love it..excellent job..

i think this story is superb.

I think this story is very interesting. It caught my attention from beginning to end.

I beleive this story held my attention captive form the begining to the end. I honestly wanted to continue reading much further.
It was an excellent story that could be developed into a book.

Does anyone know the age of this person??

Is INCREDIBLY captivating. I cant imagine how one could write such an excellent story in such a short period of time. Excellent job Vanessa!!!Excellent job!

This is so AMAZING, CAPTIVATING even!! Wish I could write like this.

This is such an excellent piece of writing I read it several times..

This is such an excellent piece of writing I read it several times..