CXC CSEC English A short story award 2002

I really enjoyed reading this story but I thought we weren't allowed to include stuff such as "love", "sex", "violence" etc.

Lol that was good!

u r allowed to some extent but make it tasteful, know how to craft it so it won't seem
offensive

i think this stroy was o.k, good plot and character it did not really live me on a i note it can gwaan

I was a bit confused when she started out like that, but she really end it quite well.

i realy enjoy readind this story lol it sel off mi gyal. notin no good so.

this was enjoyable....teaches u not to judge and luk through things clearly nice ;D

i must say i thought he was cheating too! lol very good story though

... man.. I really thought you were gonna kill that cheating crook

it would have be more awesome if you had killed him, shot him like in the face and pieces of his brain all over the kitchen, then buried him in the back yard,
and then you may want to cover your evidence.. and when reading the evidence/postcard..
you may realize that .. you wrongfully murder your husband!.. I love drama/murder/tragic..
good story

YAY MY SCHOOL!!!!! lolzz great story!

This story, quite honestly, at first wasnt interesting. But as the story progressed as all good stories do...I found the story terribly intriguing. The story was witty, it provided a twist and it was well done by this Angelina person. Bravo!

I really love this one...the twist is great...

interesting but i didn't really get the point of the story